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Original (data-heavy): “The quarterly revenue increased this quarter by a margin that was larger than we anticipated and amounted to a figure of approximately fifty-five percent compared to last quarter.”
Smart Brevity: “Revenue: +55% QoQ — exceeded expectations.” Smart Brevity Pdf
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